Books: I usually take it as a good sign when the feedback Sarah gives me for one of my chapters begins with profanity. This would be chapter 3 - my only concern is that it took that long to get a response like that out of her. Oh well. I guess everything requires setup of one kind or another. My second reader hasn't chimed in yet with her opinion. Something tells me she won't react in quite the same way as Sarah. The sentiment may be the same, but I suspect it will be expressed without a blue streak.